I am so glad we don’t have to read any more of those stupid paragraphs ….L..I never want to write another one in my life…
We’ve been reading the five part paragraphs for about three weeks. I was sick of them after the first week… I’m sure everyone else was too. One thing I noticed that most people had good topic and conclusion sentences. This is probably because it was the simplest part. About half of all readers had their quotes embedded wrong. Many people either didn’t set out to prove a point or just forgot to stick with it. Many people’s quotes were also too long. Most people didn’t have a problem getting quotes or generating commentary for them.
Focusing on my paragraph, I agree with my 89%. I had a few typos that I found and I think I could’ve made it read smoother. My second quote’s commentary was kind of short, although they were all well imbedded. My conclusion was excellent, like the 29 other papers that were read. My topic sentence was not bad. I did alright, but not great… next time I think I will be able to do a better job. But I won’t like it. You, Mrs. Gilman have made me passionately hate five-part paragraphs.
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