A.F. evaluations

Britta-

Poem

Very thorough, spans entire book. Shows irony and plot points.  Generally well done, also it’s written so it sort of resembles propaganda.

Conor-

Portrait gallery

His idea was unique. His actual project doesn’t show all that much. However it was well set up and he explained it in the same post.

Maddie-

Picture

The actual pictures she drew weren’t all that great. Also I couldn’t read some of the captions for it. As for effectiveness, it seemed to be a flow chart on the story of A.F. but I couldn’t read it, even blown up from the blog.

Jake-

Picture

Well done quality wise, but confusing. The picture wasn’t very effective because it was hard to understand. You would have to have read to the book to understand it even at all. I read the book by the way.

Nic-

Picture

It was hand drawn which was against the rules, but besides that it was good. It showed irony with napoleon wearing cloths and drinking. Also it implied the connection between A.F. and communist Russia.

Josh-

Song

Hilarious! Shows irony and plot points. A for effectiveness!

Enola-

Movie

She didn’t show it in class. Pretty well done but didn’t show any irony or foreshadowing. Not as well done as other movies (Jameson)

Aaron inc.-

Flowchart

Pretty effective and gets the job done. What’s up with the owl? Generally well explained.

Daryl-

Picture

Very well explained. Shows irony and plot points, but not foreshadowing. Shows parallels with the Russian Revolution.

Olivia-

Picture

Well explained. Shows irony but not foreshadowing. The actual picture could be better/ more polished…

As for my project people seemed to have liked it. I read a lot of positive reviews about it. In general I think I put about an even amount of work into it as everyone else did. I really regret not being to fit my comic to my blog better. If I could change one thing it would be how it was too big for the blog…