Alright… so Keenan and Josh since you have to read this …yeah so my paragraph.
First thing: I didn’t change any of my primary sources. As you know all my sources are about Cecily so as long as you don’t use any quotes from her you’ll be fine.
Second thing: Keenan, I can’t find your blog so I can’t comment on it but, assuming you read this, please change the hook, the one we have is pretty bad. Otherwise, your paragraph looked good.
ok...got it
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ps. my blog is called aqua-msn
Keep up the good work Galen! Also not to sass you but either you mixed up my name and you just know the first letter is a J or you don't know my name. My name is Jake J A K E. Not Josh. Anyways that is all.
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